The rhyme was a really nice touch, helped slide the story further into prickling surreality, and the uncertainty of whether we the readers should be hoping she drew the Moon again makes for a memorable ending. (DEFINITELY nabbed the World of Darkness vibe.)
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Date: 2019-02-16 08:25 am (UTC)