The kitty jokes are so on point. The reaction when you first don the backpack had me in stitches.
It's a fairly short read at least, so it would be an easy enough re-visit! And mostly I'm thinking about things like opening the story with "Listen:" and spinning the whole thing out in short fragments and being incredibly self-referential. It's not standard for a novel, but it's not uncommon for a fanfic.
I'd def give TSBW a go, it wasn't perfect but I enjoyed it overall.
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Date: 2022-08-14 04:38 am (UTC)It's a fairly short read at least, so it would be an easy enough re-visit! And mostly I'm thinking about things like opening the story with "Listen:" and spinning the whole thing out in short fragments and being incredibly self-referential. It's not standard for a novel, but it's not uncommon for a fanfic.
I'd def give TSBW a go, it wasn't perfect but I enjoyed it overall.