Opted for the ST one, just in case I do decide to read Paper Girls someday ;)
I liked all the detail in the memories and the observations - Will's tabletop metaphors, Mike's big Wheeler eyes, the memory of the deer - and how you used them as a contrast between Will's life before and his struggle to figure out what he is now, after, and how he fits back in. It felt like a child's attempted rationalisation of something traumatising on a terrible scale.
no subject
I liked all the detail in the memories and the observations - Will's tabletop metaphors, Mike's big Wheeler eyes, the memory of the deer - and how you used them as a contrast between Will's life before and his struggle to figure out what he is now, after, and how he fits back in. It felt like a child's attempted rationalisation of something traumatising on a terrible scale.
no subject
Thanks again. :)