sideways: (►no one else I would rather)
Winger ([personal profile] sideways) wrote 2019-02-16 08:18 am (UTC)

Opted for the ST one, just in case I do decide to read Paper Girls someday ;)

I liked all the detail in the memories and the observations - Will's tabletop metaphors, Mike's big Wheeler eyes, the memory of the deer - and how you used them as a contrast between Will's life before and his struggle to figure out what he is now, after, and how he fits back in. It felt like a child's attempted rationalisation of something traumatising on a terrible scale.

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